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Adnan's Endoplasmic Reticulum
Just War Theory
1st Draft
2nd Draft
2nd Draft
3rd/ was going to be Final Draft
Final Final Draft
Changes Made:
-Remembered to include anaylsis from how to read lit like a professor.
-Got in required quotes.
-Went back to original idea of war = social change.
- Took a neutral stance this time, but still justifying it.
-Increased the word count by a lot, was around 600 words on last draft.
-Underlined the quotes I need to cite, and to fufill MLA requirements.
-Changed the flow and rerranged a couple paragraphs.
Changes Made:
-Remembered to include anaylsis from how to read lit like a professor.
-Got in required quotes.
-Went back to original idea of war = social change.
- Took a neutral stance this time, but still justifying it.
-Increased the word count by a lot, was around 600 words on last draft.
-Underlined the quotes I need to cite, and to fufill MLA requirements.
-Changed the flow and rerranged a couple paragraphs.
Click here for link to very Final Draft.
Changes made:
-Put in citations and MLA formatting.
-Cut out a lot of words to meet word count requirement.
-Changed idea again.
- Rerranged the paragraphs again to make it flow better thanks to Ayaha's suggestion.
- Read through the project requirements again and put in required material.
- Changed thesis statement again.
-Cramped all my All Quiet Quotes into one place, and my outside quotes into their individual paragraphs.
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